My hometown：Qing Dao
Qing Dao，sited in the east of Shandong province，is a coastal city. there are a wide variety of seafoods，such as crab，fish，prawn etc...my favorite seafood is prawn，especially mantis shrimp.
In the next week，SCO summit will be hold here，and now，our government is preparing for this summit，some buildings nearby coastline have been decorated with neon light，so the scene in night is very beautiful。
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My hometown：Qing Dao
Qing Dao，sited in the east of Shandong province，is a coastal city. there is are (your subject here is 'a wide variety', which is singulary) a wide variety of seafoods (uncountable)，such as crab，fish，prawn etc...my favorite seafood is prawn，especially mantis shrimp.In the next week (next week/month/year - no preposition or article needed :)，the SCO summit will be hold here，and now，our government is preparing for this summit，some buildings nearby along/by the coastline OR by the coast have been decorated with neon lights，so the scene in at night is very beautiful。
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Great piece of writing, you can try to include a longer description of your city to practise more and so that the reader can find out more about Quindao. :) Hope all the corrections are clear.
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