I'm going to a camp and I need you to correct my self-introduction Last night,I wrote a shot composition to introduce myself,cause I'm going to participate in a camp.most people in this camp are from the North America.I want you guys to correct it for me.thank you.This is what I wrote.. hello.everyone ,nice to meet you.my name is curion,c-u-r-i-o-n.I'm a sophomore from the northeastern unniversity where you hold the concert last night.Is there any my schoolmates here?ok,thank you.it's really hard to persuade mysely to participate in this activity,cause i'm a very shy and i'm afraid of putting myself into a strange circumstance. my major is not english, and I'm not good at it,I'm afraid that i can't communicate with you fluently. but I like to make friends,i want to improve my english,especially my spoken language,this is really a great chance and a great challenge for me.I have a wide hobby,i love sports,like tennis,soccer,and i love music and movies,I have seen a lot of film from the america,so if you want to,we can talk about it.at last i would say that the most important reason for me to come here is that I want to make friends with you,do you want to be my friends too?ok,if you want,please hold up your hand, thank you!!