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Hello. Could you check my essay. When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keeps them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? One of the widely discussed issues nowadays is technological advances are having a significant impact on a nation’s traditional skills and ways of life. Now people are beginning to realize that such impact is so extraordinary that it would make conventional skills and lifestyles outdated. Personally, I tend to think that they would continue to make headway by providing alternatives to modern ways of life, and innovative ideas for modern technologies. Firstly, it is well known that most of the countries cannot operate their activities well without technology because it helps nations to fulfill society prosperous. What I mean here is that all government sectors such as military, economic, and industry exploit moderate digital devices to maintain their occupations. A good case in point is business and industry projects cannot perform well without engineering because they apply it to all activities. If production process does not use machines and worker’s tasks are not executed with modern types of equipment. Economy activities in a country will not be stable. That is why government always develops technology more perfect than before. On the other hand, it can also be argued that traditional skills and ways of life are significant to keep the originality of art and culture because they are part of national identity. Take for example some clothing companies in Asian countries produce Batik dress using the machine to make a pattern. The result will be various if Batik is made by a weaver, people who have painting skill to draw a motif on Batik. Handmade products which are made by traditional skill will be more magnificent and have high value than using technology. In conclusion, taking everything mentioned into account in our final analysis we can say that traditional skills and lifestyles are increasingly becoming a useful alternative to global applications of modern technologies. However, technology implements vital role in people life and modern inventions helps people work easily.

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Hello. Could you check my essay?

When a country develops its technology, the traditional skills and ways of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

One of the most widely discussed issues nowadays is that technological advances are having a significant impact on a nation’s traditional skills and ways of life. Now people are beginning to realize that such impact is so extraordinary that it would make conventional skills and lifestyles outdated. Personally, I tend to think that they would continue to make headway by providing alternatives for modern ways of life, and innovative ideas for modern technologies.
Firstly, it is well known that most countries cannot carry out their activities without technology because it helps the nation to make their society prosperous. What I mean here is that all government sectors such as military, economic, and industry exploit modern digital devices to carry out their occupations. A good case in point is that business and industry cannot perform well without engineering because they apply it to all activities. If the production process does not use machines and worker’s tasks are not executed with modern equipment, economic activities in a country will not be stable. That is why government continually develops and uses technology.

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