Could any native speaker help me with grammer mistakes in this part of my paper? thanks in advance!!
Chinese society is relatively a male-dominated society and in Chinese people’s mind, when two persons getting married, the bridegroom should have better economic conditions the bride. This unwritten rule demands the bridegroom to earn a better salary or to be from a richer family. Otherwise he would not be a competent husband or father who cannot even support his family economically. When a girl introduces to her parents the person that she wants to get married with, the very questions they could ask would be: “dose he owe an apartment? how much dose he earn per month?” usually, Chinese parents would not be happy to marry their daughter to a man who doesn’t own an apartment because there will be getting married without a fixed residence is not favorable to establish a stable family.
As for French people, when choosing their life partner, the most important thing is whether two persons get along well. Family background, age and other factors are relatively less important. The current French President Macron married his teacher who is 24 years older than him. In 1993, this 16-year-old high school student had an affair with his 40-year-old married French teacher, Brigitte, who had 3 children after her marriage. Macron was even in the same high school with one of her children. Brigitte was soon fascinated by Macron's writing talent, and often reads his work in front of the class. Macron also deeply fell in love with his teacher. After so many difficulties, on October 20, 2007, the two lovers finally got married. Macron was 30 years old at that time, while Brigitte was 54 years old. 9 years later, Macron has also become the youngest president in the history of France under the full support of Brigitte. Compared to China, French society is more tolerant. In China, usually in a relationship, men are older than women. Even though if the difference of ages is too large, people will talk a lot about it.
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Could any native speaker help me with grammer mistakes in this part of my paper? thanks in advance!!
Chinese society is a relatively male-dominated society and in Chinese people’s minds, when two people are getting married, the bridegroom should have better economic conditions than the bride. This unwritten rule demands the bridegroom to earn a better salary or to be from a richer family. Otherwise he would not be a competent husband or father if he cannot even support his family economically. When a girl introduces her parents to the person that she wants to get married to, the very questions they could ask would be: “Does he owe an apartment? How much does he earn per month?”. Usually, Chinese parents would not be happy to allow their daughter to marry a man who doesn’t own an apartment because they would be getting married without a fixed residence, and this is not favorable to establish a stable family.As for French people, when choosing their life partner, the most important thing is whether two persons get along well. Family background, age and other factors are relatively less important. The current French President Macron married his teacher who is 24 years older than him. In 1993, this 16-year-old high school student had an affair with his 40-year-old, married French teacher, Brigitte, who had 3 children from her previous marriage. Macron was even in the same high school with one of her children. Brigitte was soon fascinated by Macron's writing talent, and often read his work in front of the class. Macron also fell deeply in love with his teacher. After so many difficulties, on October 20, 2007, the two lovers finally got married. Macron was 30 years old at that time, while Brigitte was 54 years old. 9 years later, Macron has also become the youngest president in the history of France under the full support of Brigitte. Compared to China, French society is more tolerant. In China, usually in a relationship, men are older than women. Even though if the difference of ages is too large, people will talk a lot about it.
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