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Please,could someone revise my letter? Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this email as a last resort. As a the ultimate owner of the page where was published one photo in which I appear in a awkward position , I have been appealing to the common sense to the person who runs the page in order to delete the photo.Nevertheless it has been useless. The image is private property. Not only had I never upload this image , but also I have no idea how on earth this person has got it. To make things worse this photo is being more and more shared; it is likely to go viral. I must insist that it is a personal and private photo nothing to do with the media or network and I would like you to remove it immediately, if the responsible for the page had not been so reluctant to delete my image, I would not be taking this action now. It is supposed that you should know how your employees are or despite being you the head are you completely ignorant about how your business works? One day before the image was uploaded my boss told me that he was on the verge of promoting me to Senior Sales Manager. Needless to say that since he saw the photo on the Internet, he has been avoiding me. I would have been promoted but for your intrusion in my personal life.On the other hand I am fairly sure this unpleasant affair can be satisfactorily resolved, if you take matters into your own hands and start supervising the page directly. I really hope that I will not be forced to take further action. Yours faithfully

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Hi Isabel, just a few suggestions both for grammar and style...

Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this email as a last resort. As a the ultimate owner of the page where a photo was published one photo in which I appear in an awkward position was published, I have been appealing to the common sense to of the person who manages runs the page in order to delete the photo.Nevertheless itThis has not been successful. been useless.
The image is private property. Not only had did I never upload this image , but also I have no idea how on earth this person came to have it. has got it. To make things worse, this photo is being more and more shared more and more; it is likely to go viral.
I must insist that it this is a personal and private photo, nothing to do with the media or network and I would like you to remove it immediately. If the person responsible for the page had not been so reluctant to delete my image, I would not be taking this action now.
It is supposed that you Do you  know how your employees behave, are or despite being you their employer head are you completely ignorant about how your business works?
One day The before the image was uploaded my boss had told me that he was going to on the verge of promote ing me to the position of Senior Sales Manager. Needless to say that since he saw the photo on your website the Internet, he has been avoiding me.
I would have been promoted but for your intrusion in my personal life. On the other hand, I am fairly sure this unpleasant affair can be satisfactorily resolved, if you take matters into your own hands and have this image deleted immediately. start supervising the page directly.
I really hope that I will not be forced to take further action.
Yours faithfully

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