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A Topic about Travelling Most people don't just want to see pictures of different cities and their sights and want to look at them with their own eyes, to talk to people who live in a country, to visit museums, theaters, shops, events and to know history, culture, traditions of a country. That's the reason why they travel. I find spring or, more exactly, May the best time for a trip because the weather is neather cold nor hot and you can not only enjoy a town but flourishing, picturesque nature. I prefer travelling by plane or car. Air travel is a quick way to get to a destination. But on the other hand I can stop wherever I want and spend as much time as I like when travelling by car.

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A Topic about Travelling

Most people don't just want to see pictures of different cities and their sights, and they want want to look at them with their own eyes, to talk to people who live in another country, to visit museums, theaters, shops, events and to know learn about the history, culture and traditions of a different country. That's the reason why they travel.
I find spring or, more exactly, May the to be the best time for a trip because the weather is neather neither cold nor hot and you can not only enjoy not only a town but also flourishing, picturesque nature.
I prefer travelling by plane or car. Air travel is a quick way to get to a destination. But on the other hand  However, when I travel by car, I can stop wherever I want and spend as much time there as I like. when travelling by car.


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Hi Maria! 

Great work on your text. There are just a few mistakes with the grammar and structure in terms of the overall sentence, which can be very tricky. Using "on the one hand, on the other...." can be a bit tricky. Your overall grammar and ideas are very good. You can express yourself so well in English already! Hope this helps. Keep up the great work. :) 


Best, 


Melissa 

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