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I'm trying to learn english
Hey!My name is Caroline and i'm trying to learn english. I always loved the language and i study it by watching tv shows from US or from England without subtitles, and by listening to music.
I'm not fluent yet, but i really wanna learn more. I'm going to US at the end of the year, it will be very cool if i can be fluent untill by then .
I'm trying to learn english
Hey!My name is Caroline, and i’m I’m trying to learn english English. I've always loved the language, and I study by watching tv shows from US or from England without subtitles and listening to music.
I'm not fluent, yet, but I’d really want to learn more. I'm going to US at the end of the year; it would be very cool if I could be fluent before I get there.
Caroline, your English is good. Keep up the good work! If you ever need help or would like to practice, feel free to check out my profile. As always continue learning!
I'm trying to learn english English
Hey!My name is Caroline and i'm I'm trying to learn english English. I I've always loved the language and i I study by watching tv TV shows from the US or from England without subtitles and listening to music.
I'm not fluent yet but i I really wanna remember that "wanna" is very colloquial so only use it in text messages or facebook etc. but never in essays, emails etc etc. - it is better to use want to learn more. I'm going to the US at the end of the year, it will be very cool if i I can be fluent untill there by then. - It would very cool if I were fluent by then / It will be very cool if I am able to be fluent by then.
Good! Remember capital letters!! I wrote a reminder about "wanna" because I have had a lot of students who use it all the time as they hear it a lot in American movies etc. and don't realise that it is incredibly informal, I only ever use it in text messages or on social media and only with good friends to be honest. I also wrote two other sentences at the end as suggestions to make your last sentence sound more natural. Good luck in the US at the end of the year :)
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