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Good evening. My name is Boris, I am 38 and I am from Russia. I have a daughter. Her name is Vasilisa, she is 10 and she goes to school. We are trying to study English together. (or, Together we are trying to study English). We want to speak English. I like to study English words, but, she doesn't like to study them. :-) I love my daughter. She has a clever mind. She is a beautiful girl. I feel happy. I think that we have to study more.
This was lovely Boris - I think you can try and make your sentances a little longer. In english you can list things and seperate them with commas. My name is Ashley, I am 23, and I am from the USA. It flows a little easier for reading and speaking. It is also better to not use contractions when writing ( name's, she's) it is not wrong but it is more standard in writing to write (her name is, She is ).
Goodluck this was great!
Good evening. My name's Boris. I am 38. I'm from Russia. I have got a doughter daughter. Her name's Vasilisa. She is 10. She goes to shcool school. We together trie Together we try to study English. We want to speak English. I like to stady study English words. She does'nt doesn't like to stady study their them :-) I love my doughter daughter. She has got a clever mind is clever. She's a beutiful beautiful girl. I feel happy. I think the same also think what we have to more study study more.
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