Should we spend money on exploring space?
Since the first travel to the moon, the Mankind has known better space. Nevertheless, how much does it cost?
Firstly, what priorities should a country have? Millions of dollars are destinated to NASA, the main space company, while close there is the poorest town in the United States. Shouldn´t a government have other priorities such as take care of the people in your own country? What´s more, this money comes from the citizens.
On the other hand, the NASA has made greats discoveries to the science. For instance, they have found life on other planets. Also, they are trying to answer the biggest question: where do we come from?
Does it have a solution? Yes, of course. Public money shouldn´t be destinated to pay this expensive travels. The richest investors could give their money to this purpose, whereas the government ensures that the public money is destinated to solve the main problems of a country.
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Should we spend money on exploring space?
Since the first trip to the moon, mankind has gained more knowledge of space. Nevertheless, what is the price?Firstly, what priorities should a country have? Millions of dollars are given to NASA, the main space company, while close by there is the poorest town in the United States. Shouldn´t a government have other priorities such as taking care of the people in their own country? What´s more, this money comes from the citizens.
On the other hand, the NASA has contributed greats discoveries to science. For instance, they have found life on other planets. Also, they are trying to answer the biggest question: where do we come from?
Is there a solution? Yes, of course. Public money shouldn´t be given towards these expensive travels. The richest investors could give their money to this purpose, while the government ensures that the public money is used to solve the main problems of a country.
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Should we spend money on exploring space?
Since the first travel trip to the moon, the Mankind has known learned more about better space. Nevertheless, how much does it cost? But what was the price?Firstly, what priorities should a country have? Millions of dollars are destinated destined to NASA, the main space company, while close there is the poorest town in the United States is situated not far from it. Shouldn´t a government have other priorities, such as take taking care of the people in your own country? What´s more, this money comes from the citizens.
On the other hand, the NASA has made some greats scientific discoveries to the science. For instance, they have found life on other planets. Also, they are trying to answer the biggest question: where do we come from?
Does it have Can we find a solution to this problem? Yes, of course. Public money shouldn´t be destinated destined to pay for this these expensive trips travels. The richest investors people could give invest their money in space exploration to this purpose, whereas the government should ensures that the public money is destinated destined to solve the main problems of a the country.
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The word you need is "destined", not "destinated", because "destinated" has a different meaning. Also, you overuse it. Try using synonyms to avoid repetition, for example, "allot".
"Travel" mostly implies that it is done for pleasure. For such things as space exploration, it's better to use "trip".
In the last sentence you're talking about a particular government, therefore, you should use the article "the" before "country.
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