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"Filth" is the great film. And the great book. Yes, in my notebook I will write articles about films. Filth is one of my favorite films ever. Great acting, great music, great directing. And of course, great James McAvoy. It dizzy story maked me read the book. And do you know what? It's absolutely dirty, stunning, exciting story. The story is about just a man who tried to become a king of this life, but lost all his life. There is a continuation of this story. And it is about one of man from first book who tried to fight with pedophilia in USA on his vacation. It's really hard story, the same dirty and exciting.

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"Filth" is a great film. And a great book.

Yes, in my notebook I will write articles about films.

Filth is one of my favorite films ever. Great acting, great music, great directing. And of course, the great James McAvoy. It's a dizzy story, and that maked made me read the book. And do you know what? It's an absolutely dirty, stunning, exciting story. The story is about just a simple man who tried to become a king of this life, but lost all his life.

There is a continuation of this story. And it is about one of man the men from the first book who tried to fight with pedophiles in the USA on his vacation. It's a really hard story, the same as dirty and exciting as the first one.

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You should find another adjective instead of "dizzy". "Dizzy" means disorientated, like how you feel after spinning around very quickly for a while. So I'm not sure what you mean when you say "its a dizzy story". 

"Continuation of this story" is technically correct. But there is a word for additional books / films that continue a story, they're called "sequels". For example "Terminator 2: Judgement Day is a sequel to The Terminator". 

When you said "fight with pedophilia", I'm assuming you meant he fights people who prey on children. The people who experience "pedophilia" (the sexual attraction to children) are called "pedophiles". If you meant he fights the feeling of attraction to children itself, then its "tried to fight pedophilia".

Its also a bit unclear what you mean by "its a really hard story". Do you mean "its difficult to read?" If so, it'd be better to say "Its a really hard story to read".


Hope that helps! Very well written :)

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Yes, in my notebook I will write articles about films.

Filth is one of my favorite films ever. Great acting, great music, great direction. And of course, great James McAvoy. It dizzy story made me read the book. And do you know why? It's absolutely dirty, stunning, exciting story. The story is about a man who tried to become a king , but lost his life.

There is a continuation of this story. And it is about one of the man from the first book who tried to fight against pedophilia in USA on his vacation. It's really hard story, the same dirty and exciting.

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