Social networking
Do you remember when Social networking does not exist? It seems too far away but isn´t it. This way of interacting has completely changed our lives.
On the one hand, Social networking allows us to connect with people around the world. Therefore, we can know different cultures without leaving our homes. Besides, In these day is much easier learning a new languague than twenty years ago. Because thorugh Social networking we are able to practise as much languagues as we want.
On the other hand, because of the popularity of social networking, our privacy is under threat. People usually share valuable information in their profile, including personal data. In my opinion, most people are not enugh well informed about privacy on the internet. People should know what kind of infomation is not suitable to be uploaded.
In conclusion, social networking is a useful tool, however, everybody has to be careful about their privacy on the internet.
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Social networking
Do you remember when Social networking does not didn't exist? It seems too far away but isn´t it. Seems like it was a long time ago when in fact, it wasn't. This way of interacting has completely changed our lives.On the one hand, Social networking allows us to connect with people around the world. Therefore, we can know different cultures without leaving our homes. Besides, In these days it is much easier learning to learn a new language than it was twenty years ago. B because with the help of Social networking we are able to practise as much many languages as we want.
On the other hand, because of the popularity of social networking, our privacy is under threat. People usually share valuable information in their profile, including personal data. In my opinion, most people are not well-informed enough about privacy on the internet. People should know what kind of information is not suitable to be uploaded there.
In conclusion, social networking is a useful tool, however, but everybody has to be careful about their privacy on the internet.
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Always spellcheck what you've written in order to avoid making so many typos. I also suggest that you repeat the "many/much" and "enough" usages in English.
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