Leaflet about computers. (practise) Have you thinking about buying a new home computer? I am going to give you some advice about it. Nowadays, there is a big computers offer on market. You could buy

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Leaflet about computers. (practise) Have you thinking about buying a new home computer? I am going to give you some advice about it. Nowadays, there is a big computers offer on market. You could buy from a small laptop to a big desktop. From my view, if you want to make a good choice, the first thing you have to think about is: what do you want to do with the computer? If you want a computer to do your homework in house and in the college, I recommend you to buy a small laptop. However, if you need a computer for programming or editing photos, it may be the best choiche buying a desktop computer. About the programs that you should get, a similar answer could be given. It is going to depend on your necessities. Therefore, there is not an only answer to it. But, I always recommend buying a good office automation software because them are very useful to work. Finally, you have to be careful about the security. Currently, most of crimes are committed on the internet. So if I were you I would buy a good antivirus software in order to prevent your computer from an attack.

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Leaflet about computers. (practise)

Have you thinking (Here you could use either) Have you thought (OR) Are you thinking about buying a new home computer? I am going to give you some advice about it.
Nowadays, there is a big computers offer on market are many big computer offers on the market (If you were referring to only on particular offer, then you were right, but I think you are meaning that there are many good offers). You could buy anything from a small laptop to a big desktop model (OR) machine. From In my view (OR) From my point of view, if you want to make a good choice, the first thing you have to think about is: what do you want to do with the computer? If you want a computer to do your homework in house at home and in the college, then I recommend you to buy a small laptop. However, if you need a computer for programming or editing photos, it may be the best choice may be buying a desktop computer.
About ("About" is technically correct, but a slightly odd way of saying it. More common and accurate would be the following) With regard to the programs that you should get, a similar answer could be given. It is going to depend on your necessities needs. Therefore, there is not an only no single answer to it. But, I always recommend buying a good office automation software because them they are very useful to for work.
Finally, you have to be careful about the security. Currently, most of crimes are committed on the internet. So if I were you, I would buy a some good antivirus software (or you could say "a good antivirus software package") in order to prevent protect your computer from an attack (or you could say "in order to prevent an attack on your computer", but "protect your computer from an attack" is better).

Leaflet about computers. (practise)

Have you thought about buying a new computer? I am going to give you some advice about it.
Nowadays, there is a big computers offer on market. You could buy from a small laptop to a big desktop. From my view, if you want to make a good choice, the first thing you have to think about is: what do you want to do with the computer? If you want a computer to do your homework at home and in college, I recommend you to buy a small laptop. However, if you need a computer for programming or editing photos, it may be the best choice buying a desktop computer.
About the programs that you should get, a similar answer could be given. It is going to depend on your necessities. Therefore, there is not just one answer to it. But, I always recommend buying a good office automation software because they are very useful to work.
Finally, you have to be careful about the security. Currently, most of crimes are committed on the internet. So if I were you I would buy a good antivirus software in order to prevent your computer from an attack.

Leaflet about computers. (practice)*

Have you been thinking about buying a new home computer? I am going to give you some advice about it.
Nowadays, there is a big wide range of computers offer available on the market. You could buy anything from a small laptop to a big desktop. From In my view, if you want to make a good choice, the first thing you have to think about is: what do you want to do with the computer? If you want a computer to do your college homework in house and in the college, I recommend you to buy a small laptop. However, if you need a computer for programming or editing photos, it a desktop computer may be the best choiche buying a desktop computer.
About the programs that you should get, a similar answer could be given. It is going to depend on your necessities needs. Therefore, there is not an only just one answer to it. But, I always recommend buying a good office automation software because them are it is very useful to for work.
Finally, you have to be careful about the security. Currently, most of crimes are committed on the internet. So, if I were you, I would buy a good antivirus software application in order to prevent protect your computer from an attack.

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* In UK English, practice is the noun and practise is the verb. In North American English, both the noun and the verb are spelled practice.

Estoy de acuerdo. Buen hecho. Voy a añadir algunas correcciones más. Viviana ha hecho un buen trabajo, pero todavía no suena como el trabajo de un hablante nativo de inglés. Creo que también ha perdido unos pequeños errores.

Good job! just some mistakes.

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