Travelling by plane: pleasure or disaster?
Nowadays people travel by air more and more.
Because travelling by plane is safe and enjoyable. That's why I prefer to travel by plane. I like small planes because there are fewer persons. But now I tell you about a flight from scratch.
Before boarding the plane you must check in at the airport. At the immigration control you should show your passport, ask the questions, and then you go to register the luggage. Each passenger gets a boarding pass and shows it to the stewardess before boarding the plane. During the flight you can take a nap or have a chat, you can read and relax or eat airline food . After landing , please don't forget luggage at the airport even if you wanna see your friends!
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Travelling by plane: pleasure or disaster?
Nowadays people travel by air more and more.Because travelling by a plane is safe and enjoyable. That's why I prefer to travel by plane. I like small planes because there are fewer less persons people. But now I will tell you about a flight from scratch how to board and travel by air.
Before boarding the plane you must check in at the airport. At the Immigration Control, you should show your passport, ask the questions, and then you go to register the your luggage. Each passenger gets a boarding pass and shows it to the stewardess before boarding the plane. During the flight you can take a nap or have a chat, you can read and relax or eat airline food. After landing , please don't forget your luggage at the airport even if you wanna see your friends!
Very well written. Only minor mistakes were made. "Fewer" and "Less" mean the same thing but it is more grammatically correct to use the word "less" in that sentence. "Person" is typically used as a singular noun, while "people" is used as a plural noun. I understood what you were trying to say with "about a flight from scratch" but that doesn't sound naturally. Instead you could say, "But now I will tell you how to board and travel by air." or "But now I will tell you have to travel by air from start to finish."
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