A Holiday I Didn't Enjoy!
Two years ago I was on vacation in Georgia with my friends. We stayed in a hotel near the beach. When we arrived at the hotel we were pleased. The weather was not comfortable. It was very hot. So our skin was burned after the first hour of sunbathing. An anti-ointment did not help us.
But we met someone on the same beach. They were our friends! We were surprised! The next day we went by car to the mountains for skiing. We had wonderful time! But on the next day I realized that I was completely ill! Low temperature made me sick. It was awful!
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Jesse Nagel, thank you! Please not hesitate to write you thoughts in Russian! I guess they are interesting.
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Nice job! I would recommend a few small changes: "When we arrived at the hotel we were pleased, but the weather was not comfortable. It was very hot, so our skin was burned after the first hour of sunbathing." - connecting the related thoughts into the same sentences. "An anti-itching ointment (or anti-burn ointment) did not help us." - anti-ointment would be something working against the ointment itself ;) "But we met some people on the same beach." - because there was more than one person, and someone is just a single person.
Last year I went to Georgia and Armenia in August, and it was very hot then too. Someday soon I will try to write something in Russian, but your English is much better than my Russian!
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