My mom's birthday
Today is my mom's birthday. We'll party with a merienda with my family, that is like a tea time or maybe I could say it seems to a breakfast but in the aternoon. Yes, I think there's no a word in english for that, so I have to say it with the name in Spanish (I'm from Argentina).
My mom bought sandwitches, and we'll drink chocolate milk or maybe submarino (it seems like hot chocolate but it contains a chocolate bar that dips in the milk). My aunt will bring a cake, but I don't know if she did it, or if she bought it.
It is really fun, but the bad thing is that we'll haven't a great party, because my mom have had a kind of virus, and it's also because she still is so hurted because she had surgery to remove one of her wisdom teeth. She has the face swollen due to this.
In this way, she told me to have a party in another day with the rest of the family would be a good idea. She told me that the next time it would be fine my cousins came be to a new party. So, now I'm waiting excitingtly to my grandad, who is the only who will come to the little meeting.
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My mom's birthday
Today is my mom's birthday. We will celebrate it with a merienda with my family. That is like a tea time or maybe I should say more like a breakfast time but in the afternoon. Yes, I think there's no word in English for it, so I have to call it by its Spanish name (I'm from Argentina).My mom bought sandwiches, and we will drink milk chocolate milk or maybe submarino (resembling hot chocolate but with a chocolate bar dipped in the milk). My aunt should bring a cake, but I don't know if she has or will.
It is really fun, but the bad thing is that it is spoilt. My mom have had a kind of virus, and that is partly because she recovers from a wisdom tooth extraction. She has a swollen face due to this.
In this way, she told me that postponing the party for another day with the rest of the family would be a good idea. She told me that the next time it would be fine if my cousins came to this new party. So, now I'm waiting excitedly for my grandad, who is the only who will come to the little meeting.
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My mom's birthday
Today is my mom's birthday. We'll party with a merienda with my family, that is like a tea time or maybe I could say it seems to like a breakfast, but in the afternoon. Yes, I think there's not a word in English for that, so I have to say it with the name in Spanish (I'm from Argentina).My mom bought sandwiches, and we'll drink chocolate milk or maybe submarino (it seems like hot chocolate but it contains a chocolate bar that is dropped dips in the milk). My aunt will bring a cake, but I don't know if she did made it, or if she bought it.
It is really fun, but the bad thing is that we'll haven't won't have a great party, because my mom have has had a kind of virus, and it's also because she still is so hurted in pain because she had surgery to remove one of her wisdom teeth. She has the her face swollen due to this.
In this way, she told me to that having a party in on another day with the rest of the family would be a good idea. She told me that the next time it would be fine if my cousins came be to another new party. So, now I'm waiting excitedly to for my granddad, who is the only one who will come to the little meeting.
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