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Working 2 Thus if you work where you like working and this is, also, a well permanent paid job, congratulation, you can feel yourself very lucky. You are one person among a great amount of people. Unfortunately, lately this doesn't happen at all. Almost all the money in the world is owned by a few powerful people and the rest have to fight against all this while they and their families try to survive. Now, I think it’s time to forget for a while all this and speaking about what kind of job would probably appeal to you...Don’t you think it is pretty hard to do that? For some people maybe it's not difficult...They know what they want since always and they just do it as soon as they can. If not, in that case, it's very clear you should think about more things like the salary you will have and about how this job would be. A lot of stress or no? Working alone or in group...Of course all this depends on what you are like. Do you like working alone? Do you like working shifts? In short you must look for a good job where you can feel comfortable and wich gives to you a future full of hope. A good thing would be to be able to say..."I don't go to work, I go to enjoy, because of I love my job." Another way to think about it would be people who works to find free time for doing what they really love, because, for example, that thing is not profitable for living so they need to work in other job to earn enough money to live...but this is another story.

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Thus (1) if you work where you like working and this is, also, you have a well-paid, permanent paid job, congratulations, you can feel consider yourself very lucky. You are one person among a great amount number of people (2). Unfortunately, lately recently this doesn't happen at all has become very infrequent or nonexistent. Almost all the money in the world is owned by a few powerful people and the rest have to fight against all this while they and their families try to survive. Now, I think it’s time to forget for a while all this for a moment and speaking about discuss what kind of job would probably most likely appeal to you...Don’t you think it is pretty hard to do that? For some people maybe it's not difficult...They have always known what they want since always and they just do it as soon as they can. If not, in that case, it's very clear that you should think about more things like the salary you will have and about how this job would be. A lot of stress or not? Working alone or in group...Of course all this depends on what you are like. Do you like working alone? Do you like working shifts? In short you must look for a good job where you can feel comfortable and wich gives to you a future full of hope. A good thing would be to be able to say..."I don't go to work, I go to enjoy, because of I love my job." Another way to think about it would be people who works work to find free time for doing to do what they really love, because, for example, that thing is not profitable for sufficient to make a living so they need to work in another job to earn enough money to live...but this is another story.

(1) Usually you wouldn't start a text with "thus". Is this a continuation from a prior text?

(2) Perhaps what you are trying to say here is "you are in a very unique situation"

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