Introduction
Hi! My name is Shabe. I was born in Taiwan and now I live in Japan. I was a translator between Chinese and Japanese. I love yoga and try to do some everyday if I have time. I am trying to get my legs to be straight one day. I also like watching drama. The drama “Younger” is my favorite. I’m looking forward to the new season.
Thank you for correcting my article[emoji]
It would sound more natural to me to say: "I am trying to straighten my legs".
Also I would write "favourite" (British English) but "favorite" is also right (US English).
I hope this helps - I haven't got the hang of using all the correction tools yet so it might not be clear what I've changed and I apologise for that.