Introducing myself.
Hello to everyone! My name's Maria. I was born in Alicante, Spain, beautiful beach town surrounded by mediterranean vegetation and with an enviable weather. I studied to be an advertising professional since I love communication. I moved to London to improve my english and I'm stablished here for almost two years! Next month I'm moving back to Spain so I'm starting to feel a bit down in the dumps, I've gotten used to this country. I enjoy traveling around England, now I see how beautiful is this country and that is not only about London. Photography has become one of my top three hobbies, together with cooking and reading. I love going to the movies, here in England it was bit difficult at the begging but now I can understand the whole plot, even the jokes. Meeting new people is the most wonderful part of all this experience, it has made me grow as a person. Now I'm focused in my improvements trying to do my best as an english learner and discovering this fantastic place to share and to help people that is in the same situation as me.
Best wishes,
Maria.
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Introducing myself.
Hello to everyone! My name's Maria. I was born in Alicante, Spain, a beautiful beach town surrounded by mediterranean vegetation and with an enviable weather. I studied to be an advertising professional since I love communication. I moved to London to improve my English and I'm now established here for almost two years! Next month I'm moving back to Spain so I'm starting to feel a bit down in the dumps. I've gotten used to this country. I enjoy traveling around England, and now I see how beautiful this country is, and that is not only about London. Photography has become one of my top three hobbies, together with cooking and reading. I love going to the movies. Here in England it was bit difficult at the beggining but now I can understand the whole plot, even the jokes. Meeting new people is the most wonderful part of all this experience, it has made me grow as a person. Now I'm focused in my improvements trying to do my best as an English learner and discovering this fantastic place to share and to help those who are in the same boat as me.Very well written!
Best wishes,
Maria.
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Introducing myself.
Hello to everyone! My name's Maria. I was born in Alicante, Spain, a beautiful beach town surrounded by mediterranean vegetation and with an enviable weather. I studied to be an advertising professional since I love communication. I moved to London to improve my English and I'm stablished I've been living here for almost two years! Next month, I'm moving back to Spain, so I'm starting to feel a bit down in the dumps, . I've gotten used to this country. I enjoy traveling around England, because now I see how beautiful is this the whole country is and that it is not only about London. Photography has become one of my top three hobbies, together with cooking and reading. I love going to the movies. Here in England it was bit difficult at the begging beginning, but now I can understand the whole plot, even the jokes. Meeting new people is (has been) the most wonderful part of all this experience, it has made me grow as a person. Now I'm focused in on my improvements, trying to do my best as an English learner and discovering this fantastic place to share and to help people that is who are in the same situation as me.Best wishes,
Maria.
** Well done, Maria - you've written a lovely introduction. I have only had time to correct the few mistakes, and would have enjoyed discussing stylistic options for some of these sentences with you, such as changing the order of clauses: 'Since I love communication, I studied to be an advertising professional'. In some cases, I have changed things simply to make your English sound more native, and, since you are writing about England, you could also use British English (the cinema instead of 'the movies' and 'got' rather than 'gotten'), but these are options not errors.
I hope this has helped :) **
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