Short text on "inventions that impact on our society"
One of the most influential inventions of the last twenty years is the internet. There are people who practically live in the internet. Some of them find friends and even partners (boyfriends, girlfriends) in the internet. Thus, in some sense, the internet became a part of our nowadays society.
The second important invention is a mobile phone (or even a satellite phone). It allows you to keep in touch with your friends, relatives or business partners even if you are far away from each other. I think that this invention greatly changed our society. For example, it became very hard to "detach" from a society at least for couple weeks. You always should be ready that somebody will phone you and ask to do something, to help him and so on. After the appearance of mobile phones life became faster. It seems also that people became much more dependent on each other.
The third invention which impact cannot be overestimated is the discovery of a spaceship that allows people to "assimilate" space and other planets. A lot of books, films and even comics on this topic have appeared in recent years. Starting from "Star Wars" and finishing with "Rick and Morty" serial. So I think that space, spaceships and other related things have become common and familiar for people.
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Short text on "inventions that impact on our society"
One of the most influential inventions of the last twenty years is the internet. There are people who practically live in on the internet. Some of them find friends and even partners (boyfriends, girlfriends) in on the internet. Thus, in some sense, the internet has becaome a part of our nowadays current society.The second important invention is a the mobile phone (or even a satellite phone). It allows you to keep in touch with your friends, relatives or business partners even if you are far away from each other. I think that this invention greatly changed our society. For example, it became very hard to "detach" from a society at least for couple weeks. You should always should be ready that for somebody will to phone you and ask to do something, to help him and so on. After the appearance of mobile phones life became faster. It also seems also that people became much more dependent on each other.
The third invention which has had an impact that cannot be overestimated is the discovery of a spaceship that allows people to "assimilate" explore (or "visit" depending on what you want to say here) space and other planets. A lot of books, films and even comics on this topic have appeared in recent years. Starting from "Star Wars" and finishing with the "Rick and Morty" serial. So I think that space, spaceships and other related things have become common and familiar for to people.
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Hi! Here is a way to add an introduction, as I know during class you expressed interest in learning about introducing content in an academic essay. An introduction states the main points of your essay so the reader knows what to expect in the remainder of the essay. An introduction to this work would be something like the following:
Technology has the power to revolutionize society and some inventions have had more of an impact than others. The most important technological innovations in the last century include the Internet, the mobile phone, and the discovery of the spaceship. Each of these has had a unique, profound, and irreversible effect on society.
To begin, one of the most influential inventions of the last twenty years is the Internet...
We can discuss introductions further in one of our next classes. :)
-SR
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Short text on "inventions that impact on our society"
One of the most influential inventions of the last twenty years is the internet. There are people who practically live in the internet. Some of them find friends and even partners (boyfriends, girlfriends) in the internet. Thus, in some sense, the internet became a part of our nowadays society.The second important invention is a mobile phone (or even a satellite phone). It allows you to keep in touch with your friends, relatives or business partners even if you are far away from each other. I think that this invention greatly changed our society. For example, it became very hard to "detach" from a society at least for couple weeks. You always should be ready that somebody will phone you and ask to do something, to help him and so on. After the appearance of mobile phones life became faster. It seems also that people became much more dependent on each other.
The third invention which impact cannot be overestimated is the discovery of a spaceship that allows people to "assimilate" space and other planets. A lot of books, films and even comics on this topic have appeared in recent years. Starting from "Star Wars" and finishing with "Rick and Morty" serial. So I think that space, spaceships and other related things have become common and familiar for people.
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