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my college
now,i am a senior in a college and it is near the time that i am going to society for a job. things feel so beatiful in my school that i don't want to leave here.at this moment, there are warm teachers,ture friends and nice persons in my mind.
Cindy,do u scare of leaving here?do u scare of joining in society?do u scare of facing to all kinds of problems and phenomenons by urself?maybe answers are both yes but u can't talk it out because of u don't want to be an adult.after ur graduation,u are not a child any more,ur parents won't stay with u always and u have to learnt how to deal with kinds of relationships each others. no bad temper allowed. u can't do anything u want to.
what i want to do at this moment is to cherish what i have,enjoy it.all college life will be one of my most beautiful and unforgetable memeries in my life.
my college
now,i am a senior in college and it is near the time that i enter into society for job. i feel the things in my school is are so beautiful that i don't want to leave here.at this monment moment, there are kind teachers,true friends and nice people in my mind.
Cindy,doare u scared of leaving here?do are u scared of entering society?do are u scared of facing all kinds of problems and phenomenons by urselfyourself? maybe the answer is yes but u you can't speak it out for the reason of that u you don't want to become an adult.after uryour graduation,uyou are not a child any more,ur your parents won't stay with u you always and u you have to learn how to deal with the vorious various kinds of relationships with others, no bad temper allowed. u you can't do anything u you want. what i want to do at this monment moment is to cherish what i have,enjoy it.the college life will be one of my most beautiful and unforgetable memery in my life.
everything in green should be capitalized and for substituting you = u, It's ok to do online but writing a paper you shouldn't. Alot of emotions in this short passage good work
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