The Little Boy
I need to practice my writing English is very important to me, therefore, I've been reading short articles online about everything.
For Example, Yesterday, I was reading about a man. He did stray on an island in the ocean. The story begins with a little boy. That boy dreamed that he has a ship to navigate in the ocean but his father didn't want his son will become a mariner because her another son was a military. He died in the second world war despite this the little boy will want to become a mariner.
Please check my writing and correct my mistakes.
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The Little Boy
I need to practice my writing. English is very important to me, therefore, I've been reading short articles online about everything.For example, yesterday, I was reading about a man. He did stray strayed on an island in the ocean. The story begins with a little boy. That boy dreamed that he has had a ship to navigate in the ocean but his father didn't want his son will to become a mariner because her his other son was a in the military. He died in the second world war. Despite this the little boy will want still wanted to become a mariner.
Please check my writing and correct my mistakes.
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I need to practice my English writing. It is very important to me. Therefore, I've been reading short online articles about everything.
For Example, yesterday I was reading about a man, who stay on an island in the ocean. The story begins with a little boy. That boy dreamed that he had a ship to navigate in the ocean but his father didn't want his son to become a mariner because his other son was a militar and he died in the Second World War. Despite this the little boy want to become a mariner.
Please check my writing and correct my mistakes.
For Example, yesterday I was reading about a man, who stay on an island in the ocean. The story begins with a little boy. That boy dreamed that he had a ship to navigate in the ocean but his father didn't want his son to become a mariner because his other son was a militar and he died in the Second World War. Despite this the little boy want to become a mariner.
Please check my writing and correct my mistakes.
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