My diary
Hi everyone, I'm Lile and.....
It's difficult to me express in English, for that I decided to start to write every day in "italki" like a diary.
I have classes of English of Monday to Friday, 3 hours everyday, after my job, but for my schedules I can't practice my speaking I'm worried for that.
I need to learn English because I want to study in Canada, and I just have all 2018 to improve mi English.
I'll be happy to receive your comments or advice of how improve my English.
Please I'll so glad if you corrected my writing,
thanks U!
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Hello Lile. Welcome to iTalki.
It is a great idea to come to iTalki every day to practice your writing. Even writing a few sentences will give you a chance to practice using the new vocabulary and grammar that you are learning in your English classes.
The people here are very helpful. You'll be able to learn a lot from their corrections.
Keep writing! :-)
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My diary
Hi everyone, I'm Lile and.....It's difficult to me express myself in English.* For that reason **, I decided to start to write (or "to start writing") every day in "italki" like a diary.
I have classes of English classes of Monday to Friday, 3 hours every day, after my job. But for because of my schedules, I can't practice my speaking -- I'm worried for about that.
I need to learn English because I want to study in Canada, and I just have all 2018 to improve mi my English.
I'll be happy to receive your comments or advice of about how to improve my English.
Please, I'll be so glad if you corrected (or "could correct") my writing,
thanks U! (better to say the formal "thank you" or the casual "thanks")
* another option: "It is difficult for me to express myself in English."
** other options: "That is why I decided..." or That's why I decided..." or "That's the reason I decided...
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My diary
Hi everyone, I'm Lile and.....It's difficult to for me to express (verbos en el infinitivo siempre llevan 'to' antes del verbo en inglés) myself in English, for that so I decided to start to write writing every day in "italki" like a diary.
I have English classes of English of Monday to through Friday, 3 hours a day everyday, after my job, but for due to my schedules I can't practice my speaking, and I'm worried for about that.
I need to learn English because I want to study in Canada, and I just have all the rest of 2018 to improve my English.
I'll be happy to receive your comments or advice of how to improve my English.
Please I'll be so glad if you corrected my writing,
thanks U! Thank you!
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