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Interesting city in Australia. I'll talk about an interesting city in Australia.The city is "Coober Pedy"

It's famous for underground city.

Its temperature reaches 40℃ degrees in summer.So,there had been no resident.

However, in 1911, It was known that there were a lot of opal under ground.Then,mining opal started.And now,Coober Pedy becomes top producer of opal around the world.The amount of productions accounts for 80% in the world.

However,more interesting thing is how under ground life is.Under ground templeture is about 24℃ for a year.It's really comfortable for living.And there are a lot of facilities like bar,school,cafe and hotel.

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An Interesting City in Australia.

I'll talk about an interesting city in Australia.The city is called Coober Pedy.

It's famous for being an underground city.

Its temperature reaches 40℃ degrees in summer. So, Therefore, there had been were no residents in the past.

However, in 1911, it was known discovered that there were a lot of opals underground, and Then mining opal started.  And Now, Coober Pedy becomes is the top producer of opal around in the world.The amount of productions accounts for 80% in of the world's total.

However, a more interesting thing topic is how life underground life is works. The underground temperature is about 24℃ for a year year-round. It's really comfortable for living, and there are a lot of facilities like bars, schools, cafes and hotels.


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