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Technology (thanks por your comments) I'm going to talk about technologies. Some people like technologies and others hate it. If you ask me, I particularly love them, consequently, I always see the advantages before the drawbacks. There have been huge invents in the last thirty, forty years that they have changed our way to live. From my point of view, two of the most important are mobile phones and the Internet. Thanks to them Firstly, you can have a phone, a clock, an alarm, a scanner, a calendar, a complete collection of songs, books or maps, a radio, a camera of photos, a tv all in your palm of your hand with a smartphone. You have almost an office in your hands, and for the people, especially business people, it's very useful. Secondly, they are the fastest means of communication, we can easily contact our relatives and friends and sometimes it can save our lives in the case that we have an accident. Finally, with The Internet, you can see the relatives or friends who live in other countries, the world is smaller and smaller. In addition, you can learn online at your rhythm where, how and the time that you want Moreover, you can watch TV programs, listen to music, read books, newspapers and so on. They have disadvantages, of course, mainly for the young people. The teenagers spend too much time chatting with people that they don't meet and it could be dangerous. To sum up, mobile phones are necessary in our modern lives today. However, whether it is helpful or not, depends on our way of using it.

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Technology (thanks por for your comments)

I am going to talk about technologies.technology.
Some people like technology and others hate it. If you ask me, I particularly love them, it, consequently, I always see the advantages before the drawbacks.
There have been huge invents inventions/advances in the last thirty or forty years that they have changed our way to live.of life. From my point of view, two of the most important are mobile phones and the Internet.
Thanks to them? (Thank goodness for those.) Perhaps you meant.
Firstly, you can have a phone, a clock, an alarm, a scanner, a calendar, a complete collection of songs, books or maps, a radio, a camera of for photos, a TV, all in your the palm of your hand with a smartphone. You have almost  an a virtual office in your hands, and for the many people, especially business people, it is very useful.
Secondly, they are the fastest means of communication, we can easily contact our relatives and friends and sometimes potentially it can could save our lives if in the case that we have an accident.
Finally, with the Internet, you can see the relatives or friends who live in other countries, the world is becoming  smaller and smaller.
In addition, you can learn online at your rhythm own pace where, how and the time when that you want
Moreover, you can watch TV programs, listen to music, read books, newspapers and so on.
They have disadvantages, of course, mainly for the young people. The Teenagers spend too much time chatting with people that they don't meet know and it that could be dangerous.
To sum up, mobile phones are necessary in our modern lives today. However, whether it is helpful or not, depends on your way of using it.

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