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The quick fix society I think the quick fix society is a lifestyle of modern people who are impatient to get everything done and want to find the quick solution to everything. With the development of society ,more and more people are choosing car instead of bicycle or walking on their short trip.There is no doubt that it saves their time,but also they missed the scenery along the way.The quick fix society also changed communcation style.In the old days,people keep in touch with letter and other tools in phone,friends talk more but they don't get closer. Eating habits also change a lot.Young people are busy working and choosing fast food instead of cooking by their own.It was a luxury to wait for a dish to come into being.And when you want to buy something,you always choice Alipay rather than cash. What's more,Artificial intelligence is widely used in manufactoring.Compared with hand-made,it more cheaper and faster.But some traditional skills are disappearing. Please help me to correct this passage.:) Thank you!

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The Quick Fix Society   [In titles always capitalize the first, last and all important words.]

I think the quick fix society is a lifestyle of modern people who are impatient to get everything done and want to find the quick solution to everything.
With the development of society, more and more people are choosing a car instead of a bicycle or walking
on their short trips. There is no doubt that it saves their time, but also they miss the scenery along the way. The quick fix society also changed our communication style. In the old days, people kept in touch with letters and other tools, but with phones, friends talk more but they don't get closer.
Eating habits also change a lot. Young people are busy working and choosing fast food instead of cooking on their own. It was a luxury to wait for a dish to come into being. And when you want to buy something, you always choose Alipay rather than cash.
What's more, artificial intelligence is widely used in manufacturing. Compared with being hand-made, it is more cheaper and faster. But some traditional skills are disappearing.

[Remember that there is never a space before a comma or period, and they always have a space after them.]

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