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Personal Statement In my view, it is a gradual process to improve my abilities and enrich my knowledge since I entered the university. When I was a freshman, I join in our university flag guard and it is a good opportunity to improve my abilities. The training, especially the high-intensity summer training, which is repeated and boring, tests both my physical and spiritual endurance so that I improves my own endurance and self-regulation. When I was a sophomore, I became a trainer in the flag guard and gradually began to prepare for scientific research, which is a cumulative process for me. During this time, I served as Minister of Discipline Inspection and Minister of Training, which cultivated my leadership and the ability to control of the whole team.

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Personal Statement

In my view, improving my abilities and enriching my knowledge is a gradual process since I entered the university. When I was a freshman, I joined in our university flag guard, and it was a good opportunity to improve my abilities. The training, especially the high-intensity summer training, which is repetitive and boring, tests both my physical and spiritual endurance so that I improves my own endurance and self-regulation. When I was a sophomore, I became a trainer in the flag guard and gradually began to prepare for scientific research, which is a cumulative process for me. During this time, I served as Minister of Discipline Inspection and Minister of Training, which cultivated my leadership and the ability to control of the whole team.

Excellent! Great language skills. Flag guard, the truth is that I don't know what that is... Please send me a message if you have any questions or comments. Take care!


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I agree. Anything that is good from life is a gradual process. Most things quick or easily obtained are short lived and unfulfilling. Your English is excellent. Cheers, Mike

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