First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi guys, my name is Tony. Q and I come coming from China. I'm 27 years old: learning English is my hobby, and I like football very much. I always think that English is a beautiful language in the world, and it's so exciting when I can speak English so well. To me, it's a I am still a little poor in my English, but I still believe that the more you practice, the more you gain. So, I would like to make friends with the people who have the same hobbies as me; I'm waiting for your message^^,,,,,,,,,

Take note that there's always a space after every punctuation mark (period, comma, etc.). Note that it's also bad practice to write "you" as "u" and "your" and "ur". Otherwise, yes, the more you practice the more you'll improve! :)