EMAIL GIVING MY OPINION ABOUT AN ARTICLE (UNTRUE)
Good morning (In the right upper corner ) Monday, 25th October, 2018
My name is Andrea Sadia and I consider that I am your fan. Congratulations for the publication you did in The Star. It´s a very interesting writing because I think shopping is a very important topic nowadays.
First of all, shopping centers and shops are the most visited places in the world. People buy things and food every day; they spend a very long time shopping. In fact, sometimes it is a problem because we buy things that we don´t really need it.
In the past, society just did their shopping in little shops in their villages, towns and cities, and they did it carefully, with moderation. Nowadays world is growing up very fast and we can have anything anywhere. For example, online shops, they are very useful, you can order whatever you want with a “click” just sitting at home and received it at the same place.
On the other hand, big companies have the power in economy and personally I think we support our country if we do our shopping in little shops. The most of the big companies do sales very often and Black Friday is one of them. From my point of view, this offer is very useful and you can save money but only in electronic department. So they have very good discounts in computers, mobile phones, printers, etc.
In my opinion, you should buy just what you need at the moment, and in this way you won´t lose money!
Finally, I will say that the way you look at the shopping topic and the way you do it starts at home when you are little, so education by family is the most important thing to know how to do it correctly.
Kind Regards
Andrea Sadia Morillas
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EMAIL GIVING MY OPINION ABOUT AN ARTICLE (FICTIONAL)
Good morning Monday, 25th October, 2018My name is Andrea Sadia and I count myself your fan. Congratulations for the story you wrote in The Star. It´s a very interesting piece because I think shopping is a very important topic nowadays.
First of all, shopping centers and shops are the most visited places in the world. People buy things and food every day; they spend a very long time shopping. In fact, sometimes this is a problem because we buy things that we don´t really need.
In the past, society just shopped in little shops in their villages, towns and cities, and they did it carefully and moderately. Nowadays the world is growing up very fast and we can have anything anywhere. For example, online shops. These are very useful, and you can order whatever you want with a “click” just sitting at home, and you can receive it in your armchair.
On the other hand, big companies have the power in the economy and personally I think we support our country if we do our shopping in little shops. Most big companies have sales very often and Black Friday is one of them. From my point of view, this offer is very useful and you can save money but only when buying electronic goods. So they have very good discounts in computers, mobile phones, printers, etc.
In my opinion, you should buy just what you need for the moment, and in this way you won´t waste your money!
Finally, I will say that the way you look at the shopping topic and the way you do it starts at home when you are little, so education by the family is the most important thing to know how to do correctly.
Kind Regards
Andrea Sadia Morillas
Very well written!
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