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My dear, Britney krystal I'm a student of Bristol College of arts, I would like to help with the organization of the charity evening.
I would like to ask a few questions in my letter .I would like to specify the date and time of the event .I would also like to say that I have experience in organizing activities .
I can not ask question about the genre of the musical groups that you want to find.By the way, I'm also interested in the dinner scene.I will try to invite all my friends and acquaintances to this wonderful charity event .What style clothing should be?I want tell your friends about it.
I will try to make every effort to achieve the goal and collected the necessary amount of money.
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The Letter
My dear Britney Krystal, I'm a student of Bristol College of Arts, and I would like to help with the organization of the charity evening.
I would like to ask a few questions in my letter and to ascertain its date and time. I would also like to say that I have experience in organizing activities.
I cannot ask about the genre of the musical groups that you want to find. By the way, I'm also interested in the dinner scene. I will try to invite all my friends and acquaintances to this wonderful charity event. What is the dress code? I want tell my(?) friends about it.
I will try to make every effort to achieve the goal(?) and collect the necessary amount of money.
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My dear, Britney krystal I'm a student of Bristol College of arts, I would like to help with the organization of the charity evening. I would like to ask a few questions in my letter .I would like to specify the date and time of the event .I would also like to say that I have experience in organizing activities . I can not ask question about the genre of the musical groups that you want to find.By the way, I'm also interested in the dinner scene.I will try to invite all my friends and acquaintances to this wonderful charity event .What style clothing should be?I want tell your friends about it. I will try to make every effort to achieve the goal and collected the necessary amount of money.
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