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Please correct me. ‪One of the best things can ever happen to you when getting home tired from work it’s to open the fridge and find a large bag of the best fruit on earth.‬

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Please correct me.

‪One of the best things that can ever happen to you is when you getting home tired from work, it’s to open the fridge, and find a large bag of the best fruit on earth.‬*


*Or: One of the best things that can ever happen to you is when getting home tired from work, it’s to opening the fridge, and finding a large bag of the best fruit on earth.‬

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The Best Fruit on Earth

‪One of the best things that can ever happen to you when you've arrived home tired from work is to open the fridge and find a large bag of the best fruit on earth.‬

What is more interesting for a reviewer to read? Please correct me or The Best Fruit on Earth? 

Titles are where we look to read interesting texts. Please correct me doesn't tell us much and definitely isn't interesting. However, The Best Fruit on Earth or something like that would intrigue many to see what you've written. Titles are the essence of writing. If there weren't titles on the front page of newspapers, nobody would read them. Try it in your next posting. It works all the time.



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Please correct me.

‪One of the best things that can ever happen to you when getting coming home tired from work it’s is to open the fridge and find a large bag of the best fruit on earth.‬

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