A strange country...(UAE-DUBAI)
Last night I had a dream of my last visit to Dubai and as soon as I stood up from the bed, I was curious to write something about my trip which I had once again experienced in my dream world...
Here we go I am finally in my space, to do something I was curious, since morning,
Myself with my backpack was stepping out from the airport and suddenly I looked at the attire they people were wearing. That was pure while KANDORA (traditional dress).
I found Dubai as a complete city where you can enjoy the nightlife, you can enjoy the beach also can enjoy the beautiful desert!
I love you Dubai and will be back soon!!!!!!!
All your corrections are highly appreciated!
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A strange country...(UAE-DUBAI)
Last night I had a dream about my last visit to Dubai; and as soon as I stood up from my bed, I was interested in writing something about my trip that I had once again experienced in my dream world.Because I am finally in that space that let's me do what I wanted to do since morning, I'm going to write about my dream trip.
I, with my backpack, was stepping out from the airport. Suddenly I looked at the attire that the people were wearing. Everyone was wearing pure KANDORA (traditional dress).
I found Dubai to be a complete city where you can enjoy nightlife, enjoy the beach, and enjoy the beautiful desert!
I love you Dubai and will be back soon!
All your corrections are highly appreciated!
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