A surprise party
Hi Peter!
I´m looking forward to seeing your sister´s face the day of the party. It´s going to be amazing. If I were you I would not book the Majestic Hotel because we don´t have as much money as we would like. I would rather go to the Moma, which is cheaper.
I have been thinking about the present for your sister. She has always dreamed travel to Paris, so we may prepare a trip for the summer. However, it´s a small wonder if we have to pay a little bit more for the flight because we are in June and the price raises. How do you fancy come with us?
Currently, I´m working in my father´s company, so I can´t come to help you with the preparations for the party.
To make this party special, I could call a rock band. Anne will have a lot of fun.
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A Surprise Party [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words.]
Hi Peter!I´m looking forward to seeing your sister´s face the day of the party. It´s going to be amazing. If I were you I would not book the Majestic Hotel because we don´t have as much money as we would like. I would rather go to the Moma, which is cheaper.
I have been thinking about the present for your sister. She has always dreamed of traveling to Paris, so we may prepare a trip for the summer. However, it´s a small wonder if we have to pay a little bit more for the flight because that/it will be in June and the price raises up*. How do you fancy coming with us?
Currently, I´m working in my father´s company, so I can´t come to help you with the preparations for the party.
To make this party special, I could call a rock band. Anne will have a lot of fun.
[* Or: "the price rises [up]."]
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A surprise party
Hi Peter!I´m looking forward to seeing your sister´s face the day of the party. It´s going to be amazing. If I were you I would not book the Majestic Hotel because we don´t have as much money as we would like. I would rather go to the Moma, which is cheaper.
I have been thinking about the present for your sister. She has always dreamed to travel to Paris, so we may prepare a trip for the summer. However, it´s small wonder if we have to pay a little bit more for the flight because we are in June and the price raises. How do you fancy coming with us?
Currently, I´m working in my father´s company, so I can´t come to help you with the preparations for the party.
To make this party special, I could call a rock band. Anne will have a lot of fun.
Very well written, with hardly a correction needed.
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A surprise party
Hi Peter!I'm* looking forward to seeing your sister's* face the day of the party. It's* going to be amazing. If I were you, I would not book the Majestic Hotel because we don't* have as much money as we would like. I would rather go to the Moma, which is cheaper.
I have been thinking about the present for your sister. She has always dreamed travel of/about going to Paris, so we may prepare could plan a trip for the summer. However, it's* a small wonder if we will probably have to pay a little bit more for the flight because we are in it's already June and the price raises goes up. How Do you fancy come going with us?
Currently, I'm* working in my father's* company, so I can't* come to help you with the preparations for the party.
To make this party special, I could call a rock band. Anne will have a lot of fun.
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* an apostrophe ( ' ) isn't the same character as a tilde without a letter ( ´ ). On a Spanish keyboard, the apostrophe is to the right of the 0 (zero) key.
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