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Watching television is bad for children. To what extend do you agree or disagree? "Smart people have a large library, while poor people have a great television". This statement could say so much about influences telly on a human being, however, every day we develop more and more absolutely different kinds of channels. This essay will discuss pros and cons watching television for children. First of all, I would like to point out that nowadays we have many teaching cartoons, which help babies to learn from them the world in an interesting way. I have a daughter 4 years old, she loves to watch cartoons. Once I heard she sand a kind and pleasant song. I was wondering and asked who taught you to sing this song, maybe in kindergarten? She replied that this song from a cartoon which she heard at grandmother house. Another key point she is a truly active child and could run non stop all the day, nevertheless, I can be absolutely calm and free one hour a day during she watching an animation. In this case, I see only benefits for little one from watching television. Important to realize that not all television is same be helpful. On the negative side, person incidentally could pick some channel for adults and see some movie with a crime or even scene with sexual details which could develop a wild interest in it. So, it might be extremely dangerous for children. Frequently parents overlooked what exactly watching their kids. Therefore, television could bring wrong influence. At the same time, I would like to emphasize that while children procrastinate the significant time on the screen, they could be outside on fresh air or just spend time with family. To conclusion, I can say that watching television for children useful, but the most essential we must control what they watch and how long.

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Watching television is bad for children. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

"Smart people have a large library, while poor people have a large television". This statement could say so much about the influence of telly on us, however, every day we develop more and more absolutely different kinds of channels. This essay will discuss the pros and cons of children watching television.
First of all, I would like to point out that nowadays we have many teaching cartoons, which help babies to learn about the world in an interesting way. I have a 4 year old, and she loves to watch cartoons. Once I heard her sing a kind and pleasant song. I was wondering and asked her who taught her to sing this song, maybe in kindergarten? She replied that the song was from a cartoon which she had seen at her grandmother's. Another key point is that she is a truly active child and can run non stop all day. Nevertheless, I can be absolutely calm and free for one hour a day while she watches an animation. In this case, I see only benefits for little ones from watching television.
It is important to realize that not all television is helpful. On the negative side, one could accidentally pick some adult channel and see some movie with a crime or even sexual scene which could arouse in us a wild interest in it. So, it might be extremely dangerous for children. Frequently parents overlook what exactly it is that their kids are watching. Therefore, television could bring a calamity. At the same time, I would like to emphasize that while children waste a long time by the screen, they could be outside in the fresh air or just spend time with their family.
In conclusion, I can say that watching television for children is useful, but it is essential that we control what they watch and for how long.

Very well written!

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