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Shopping "Ey, Mike, why don't you come shopping with me? I'm going to the great new store near here. The first day, they are on sale so it's probably we could find good stuffs or something what you need cheaper than usual. What do you think? Come on, dude, get with it! There'll be bargains." This is what my friend told me the other day, but unfortunality I had to tell him "Not, I can't go with you, but thank for ask me because I really appreciate you thought about me." To be honest, when someone ask me about going shopping, I have to think a lot about it because I prefer to get all I need online, by internet. Why? Frist of all, it's more comfortable, chepper and faster than buying in the stores with all people around you and waiting to pay in a queue. What a mess! I've never liked going shopping so always what I can avoid it, I do. And if you need, for instance, take something back, you can do it too, without any problems. The only one I see with this, if when I need to buy new clothes because normally, despite I don't like going shooping, I have to do, because I need to try them on and I always try to bring with me some friend to ask him or her if, for example, the shirt suits me or, instead of that, I should try another one. Anyway, I only buy what I need. I don't have any expensive luxury and I try not to waste my money. Thinking about that, I would say I prefer to spend my money in other things like going on a travel or beers or both or just whatever I feel like at any time. Now, if you want to get to know more about all this, please feel free to ask me everything you want. I remember I told him this and he told me he had just a question more. Then, after a second, he asked me where I prefered to buy online and I remember I said that I prefered to buy on “Amazon” because I am customer of them and I can take advantage of this with many pretty offers, and the delivery only takes 24 hours, something, what for me, is amazing, like magic. Besides, I can’t afford to through out my money all the time and, even thought I could do it, I wouldn’t do it. So finally my friend went to buy alone...and I went to the bar.

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This is way too long, I'll correct a bit themn maybe have another go. Hey Mike, do you want to come shopping with me? I'm going to that great new store near here. This is their first day and everthing is on sale, we will probably find some good things, you may find something you need thats cheaper than usual. What do you think? Come on, dude, get with it! There'll be bargains." This is what my friend told me the other day, but unfortunality I had to tell him "No I can't go with you, but thank you for asking me because I really appreciate you thinking about me."

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To be honest, when someone ask me about going shopping, I have to think a lot about it because I prefer to get all I need online, by internet. Why? Frist of all, it's more comfortable, chepper and faster than buying in the stores with all people around you and waiting to pay in a queue. What a mess! I've never liked going shopping so always what I can avoid it, I do. And if you need, for instance, take something back, you can do it too, without any problems. The only one I see with this, if when I need to buy new clothes because normally, despite I don't like going shooping, I have to do, because I need to try them on and I always try to bring with me some friend to ask him or her if, for example, the shirt suits me or, instead of that, I should try another one. Anyway, I only buy what I need. I don't have any expensive luxury and I try not to waste my money. Thinking about that, I would say I prefer to spend my money in other things like going on a travel or beers or both or just whatever I feel like at any time. Now, if you want to get to know more about all this, please feel free to ask me everything you want. I remember I told him this and he told me he had just a question more. Then, after a second, he asked me where I prefered to buy online and I remember I said that I prefered to buy on “Amazon” because I am customer of them and I can take advantage of this with many pretty offers, and the delivery only takes 24 hours, something, what for me, is amazing, like magic. Besides, I can’t afford to through out my money all the time and, even thought I could do it, I wouldn’t do it. So finally my friend went to buy alone...and I went to the bar.

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