Factors of success
Success consists of many parts. Of course, education is very important in the modern world, but it does not guarantee you an accurate success. And for example, friends can be your support and support in difficult times, but with the help of friends, success is not achieved. Perhaps important are good manners, a positive attitude and irreproachable belief in oneself.
P.S. In addition to corrections, can you express your point of view. Thank you
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Factors of success
Success consists of many parts. Of course, education is very important in the modern world, but it does not guarantee you success. Also, for example, friends can be your support and support you in difficult times, but with their help, success is not guaranteed. Perhaps more important are good manners, a positive attitude and an irreproachable belief in oneself.P.S. In addition to corrections, can you express your point of view. Thank you
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Success consists of many parts. Of course, education is very important in the modern world, but it does not guarantee you an accurate success. And For example, friends can be your support and support in difficult times, but with the help of friends, success is may not be achieved (this statement is not a fact so we have to add "may not be acheived" to show our opinion). Perhaps what is important are good manners, a positive attitude and irreproachable belief in oneself. P.S. In addition to corrections, can you express your point of view. Thank you
Great job! As you said, success comes from many places. I think its important to thank everyone along the way who helped you achieve success. Most of the time successful people had someone to help them. It could be a parent, teacher or best friend. Its important to remember them and also to pay it forward to someone else.
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