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Writing training one Today i saw a chatting topic which is about owning a own home or renting a house,so i try to write a paragrah about it for also training my writing.Wish you to correct my grammar mistake . I myself is renting a flat now,which is small and crowed;expensive,too.Owning my own house is unimaginable for me,for my salary is too low and the cost of a house is too high.If i would have enough money i did not want to buy one too,for it would bind me. Actually,it would run out my lifetime to buy a house.Can owning my own house give me the security,and the peace? Maybe i am not old for wishing of the stablity in my life;i want to pursue more possibilities of my life,wishing to visit more places and learn more kinds of knowledge.House is not a home,which is so big and i was so small,for it would make me confuse that it is my world,it does not make me feel peace,i think.

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Today I saw a chat topic which was about owning a own home or renting a house, so I am trying to write a paragrah about it to also train my writing. I wish you will correct my grammar mistakes.
I myself am renting a flat now, which is small and crowded and expensive, too. Owning my own house is unimaginable for me, because my salary is too low and the cost of a house is too high.  Even if I would have enough money I would not want to buy one too, for it would bind me financially. Actually, it would run out my lifetime to buy a house. Can owning my own house give me security and peace?
Maybe I am not old for wishing stablity in my life; I want to pursue more possibilities of my life, wishing to visit more places and learn more kinds of knowledge. A house is not a home, which is so big and I am so small, for it would make me confuse that it is my world and it would not make me feel peace, I think.

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Today I saw a chat topic which was about owning a own home or renting a house, so I am trying to write a paragrah about it to also train my writing. I wish you will correct my grammar mistakes. I myself am renting a flat now, which is small and crowded and expensive, too. Owning my own house is unimaginable for me, because my salary is too low and the cost of a house is too high. Even if I would have enough money I would not want to buy one too, for it would bind me financially. Actually, it would run out my lifetime to buy a house. Can owning my own house give me the security and the peace? Maybe I am not old for wishing stablity in my life;I want to pursue more possibilities of my life, wishing to visit more places and learn more kinds of knowledge. A house is not a home, which is so big and I am so small and it would make me confuse that it is my world, and it would not make me feel peace, I think.

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