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You did a good job already :)
English skills
I'm Nozomi. 16 years old. I am from Osaka, Japan. Osaka has a lot of famous foods--Takoyaki,and Okonomiyaki ,for example, and other. I am studying abroad in New Zealand to improve my English skills. I live in Palmerston North where there are many natural landscapes is. (It's a) Nice place!My hobby is workout (*Tough some people might argue that workout can't even count as a hobby). In Japan, I went to training at the gym everyday, but in NZ, I don't go to the gym. Because I do not have confidence (*What do you have no confidence in? You may add your concern to make the sentence clearer.)...
New Zealand English is different from American English, especially the acccent. I had learned American English in Japan, but New Zealand English is closer to British English. Nz's The accent is too difficult (*too difficult to learn or to understand or to ?).....
However, it is necessary for me to communicate with other country people from other countries, so I'll do my best.
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