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talk about magazine In the past,magazines was generally published on a regulare schedule and contain a variety of content,for example : some geography about lands and seas.man and wonman's fashion,the gossip about celebrity`s private life .But now it's not popular than before in China.Are magazines popular in your country?What are the most pupular magazines or electronic magazines? I'm Taylor,a software engineer in ShangHai, China.If you want make a friend with me,please contract with the next ways: wechat:openddd email/skype:[email protected]

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Talking About Magazines.

In the past, magazines were generally published on a regulare schedule and contained a variety of content. For example:
Some geography about lands and seas. Men's and women's fashion, the gossip about celebrities private lives. But now it's not popular than before in China. (Not sure what you mean here.)

Are magazines popular in your country? What are the most popular magazines or electronic magazines?

I'm Taylor, a software engineer in ShangHai, China. If you want make a friends with me, please contract with the next ways: me on:

wechat:openddd
email/skype:[email protected]

Good job! But a couple of pointers.

1)Remember to always put a space after a comma or a full stop.

2)Remember that after you use a full stop the next sentence must begin with a capital letter.

3) Capitalise your titles.

Other than that, I don't have many comments except the few changes I made and some spacing corrections.

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