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Some people think that government should give more money to railways than to roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays the public transport is an essential part of human life. However, sometimes people arouse huge disputes regarding an unequal distribution of government budget on railways and roads. As for me, every branch of public transport deserves to be paid attention to.
It goes without saying, that cars today are considered to be the most convenient type of transport. They are used on daily basis to get from one point of destination to another one both within a city or town and outside them. Besides, on condition that one’s budget does not quite stretch to purchase a car, there is no other alternative than to use public transport which is represented by a wide range of buses, trams or trolleys. Therefore, an issue of providing a good quality of roads cannot be overestimated. Unfortunately, while in densely populated cities in Ukraine the roadways are renovated regularly, in small villages or on main country rods a situation deserves better. This fact is backed up by road statistic figures which prove a car to be the most dangerous type of transport.
Conversely, a train is regarded to be the safest and cheapest type of transport today. It is not only appropriate for all age groups including retired people or toddlers who can easily be nauseous in cars but is used widely during some crisis situations, especially when winter storms hamper the traffic considerably. Such significance of railway transport for society determines the necessity of taking regular measures and seizing the control by a government regarding the state of railway roads. Unconscientious and ill-timed actions of a government aimed at improving the railway roads can lead to dire consequences such as huge disasters with a high casualty rate and breach of trust of the society to the authorities.
To sum up, I strongly believe that both roads and railways require close attention and regular funding of a government. It is due to the fact that a state of public transport makes a huge impact on people living condition and their relation to a government.
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Some people think that government should give more money to railways than to roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays the public transport is an essential part of human life. However, sometimes people arouse huge disputes regarding an unequal distribution of government budget on railways and roads. As for me, every branch of public transport deserves to be paid attention to. It goes without saying, that cars today are considered to be the most convenient type of transport. They are used on daily basis to get from one point of destination to another one both within a city or town and outside them. Besides, on condition that one’s budget does not quite stretch to purchase a car, there is no other alternative than to use public transport which is represented by a wide range of buses, trams or trolleys. Therefore, an issue of providing a good quality of roads cannot be overestimated. Unfortunately, while in densely populated cities in Ukraine the roadways are renovated regularly, in small villages or on main country rods a situation deserves better. This fact is backed up by road statistic figures which prove a car to be the most dangerous type of transport. Conversely, a train is regarded to be the safest and cheapest type of transport today. It is not only appropriate for all age groups including retired people or toddlers who can easily be nauseous in cars but is used widely during some crisis situations, especially when winter storms hamper the traffic considerably. Such significance of railway transport for society determines the necessity of taking regular measures and seizing the control by a government regarding the state of railway roads. Unconscientious and ill-timed actions of a government aimed at improving the railway roads can lead to dire consequences such as huge disasters with a high casualty rate and breach of trust of the society to the authorities. To sum up, I strongly believe that both roads and railways require close attention and regular funding of a government. It is due to the fact that a state of public transport makes a huge impact on people living condition and their relation to a government.
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Some people think that the government should give more money to railways than to roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Nowadays public transport is an essential part of human life. However, sometimes people disagree strongly regarding unequal distribution of government budget on railways and roads. To me, every branch of public transport deserves to be paid attention to. It goes without saying, that cars today are considered to be the most convenient type of transport. They are used on daily basis to get from one point of destination to another both within a city or town and outside them. However if one’s budget does not quite stretch to purchase a car, there is no other alternative than to use available public transport: trains, buses or trams . Therefore, an issue of providing good quality roads cannot be overestimated. Unfortunately, while in densely populated cities in Ukraine the roadways are renovated regularly, in small villages or on main country roads maintenance is often lacking. This fact is backed up by road statistic figures which prove a car to be the most dangerous type of transport. Conversely, a train is regarded to be the safest and cheapest type of transport today. It is not only appropriate for all age groups including retired people or toddlers who can easily be nauseous in cars but is used widely during some crisis situations, especially when winter storms hamper the traffic considerably. The significance of railway transport for society determines the necessity of taking regular measures and seizing the control by government regarding the state of railway lines/tracks. Unconscientious and ill-timed actions of a government aimed at improving the railway infrastructure can lead to dire consequences such as huge disasters with a high casualty rate and breach of trust of the society by the authorities. To sum up, I strongly believe that both roads and railways require close attention and regular funding by government. It is due to the fact that good public transport makes a huge impact on people's living condition and their attitude to the government.
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