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I quarreled with a guy yesterday. I am a lawyer, I said that before,.So you know, I probably meet some bad guys in court as a lawyer. Yesterday, I went to the court to meet the defenddant in my case as an agent.He was a guy that younger than me with a subecial hair style that looks like mane of a horse. He breached of the contract that signed with my client.We were supposed to come to a settlement. When we begain to talk , he seemed hate me very much as I said he was an dishonest person, so we should add some terrms to the settlement agreement.Such as if he won't pay the penalties,he must pay more interests. He yellded that"you shut up!Is that because you feel guilty about geting too much money but doing too little things.Stop saying anything!" I thought it was ridiculous for him to say that, I said,"My client paid me for helping them get more rights and interests. yes, maybe I don't want to come to a settlement, I hope to argue with you in court. " He was still angry,but the judge stoped him, and let us calm down. Finally, we signed a settlement.My client was very satisfied and said sorry to me. I know it happens all the time, I am a lawyer and I don't care about this.

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I quarrelled with a guy yesterday.

I am a lawyer, I said that before. So you can imagine, I probably meet some bad guys in court.
Yesterday, I went to court, as an agent, to meet the defendant in my case. He was younger than me and wore his hair like a horse's mane. He was in breach of a contract that he had signed with my client. We were supposed to come to a settlement.
When we began to talk , he seemed to hate me very much as I said he was dishonest, so we should add some terms to the settlement agreement. Such as if he would not pay the penalties, the he would pay more interest.
He yelled "you shut up! Is that because you feel guilty about getting too much money for doing too little? Stop saying anything!"
I thought it was ridiculous for him to say that, and said, "My client paid me to help them get more rights and interest, yes. Maybe I don't want to come to a settlement and I hope to argue with you in court."
He was still angry, but the judge stopped him, and let us calm down.
Finally, we signed a settlement. My client was very satisfied and said sorry to me.
I know it happens all the time. I am a lawyer and I don't care about this.

Very well written!

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I Quarreled with a Guy Yesterday      [In titles always capitalize the first, last, and all important words. Never include an ending period but do include "?" or "!" if they end the title.]

I am a lawyer, I said that before. So you know I probably meet some bad guys in court as a lawyer.
Yesterday, I went to the court to meet the defendant, in my case as an agent. He was a guy younger than me with a special hair style that looked like the mane of a horse. He breached the contract that was signed with my client. We were supposed to come to a settlement.
When we began to talk, he seemed to hate me very much as I said he was a dishonest person so we should add some terrms to the settlement agreement, such as if he won't pay the penalties he must pay more interest.
He yielded saying, "You shut up! It is that you feel guilty about getting too much money but for doing too little. Stop saying anything!"
I thought it was ridiculous for him to say that, so I said, "My client paid me for helping them get more rights and interests. Yes, maybe I don't want to come to a settlement, I hope to argue with you in court."
He was still angry, but the judge stopped him, and said, "Let us calm down."
Finally, we signed a settlement. My client was very satisfied and said sorry to me.
I know it happens all the time, I am a lawyer and I don't care about this.

[Always include a space after each coma. Also after any punctuation that ends a sentence (".", "?", "!") when another sentence follows.]

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