WRITING 7. HOOKED SOCIAL NET
These days it´s easy to find people that are a bit hooked on the internet or social networks. The Internet bring us a new world and new way for seeing everything and another kind to be in touch with family and friends. All these reasons are advantages for this time, but on the other hand, to be hooked on social networks has disavantages almost for teenagers.
I will try to give some advice to disconnect of the internet or to make a well use of it.
BE CAREFUL when you have a new friend request; it could be a stranger person.
NEVER give your account bank if you don´t know the website, because probably isn´t reliable.
ALWAYS login out when you finish your sesion of your site.
TRY TO use the internet for usefull ways
TAKE TIME to spend it out with your friends.
To sump up, use the Internet but with head and always take security measures.
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WRITING 7. HOOKED ON SOCIAL MEDIA
These days it´s easy [regular] to find people that are a bit hooked on the internet or social networks[media]. The Internet brings us a new world, a new way for seeing[ of accessing ]everything and another kind [allows us] to be[stay] in touch with family and friends. All these reasons [There are many] advantages , but on the other hand, to be hooked on social networks has [many]disadvantages too almost - [especially] for teenagers.
[ Here is] some advice to disconnect of [from]the internet or to make a well use of it.[use it well]
BE CAREFUL when you have a [of] new friend requests.
NEVER give your account bank [banking details] if you don´t know the website. It could be unreliable.
ALWAYS login out [logout] when you finish a session with a site.
TRY TO use the internet for usefull ways [to your advantage].
TAKE TIME OFF to spend it out with your friends.
To sump up, use the Internet but with head [be cautious] and always take security measures.
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WRITING 7. HOOKED ON SOCIAL NETWORKS
These days it´s easy to find people that are a bit hooked on the internet or social networks. The Internet bring us a new world, and new ways for seeing everything, and another kind way to be in touch with family and friends. All these reasons are advantages for living in this time, but on the other hand, to bebeing hooked on social networks has disadvantages, almost especially for teenagers.I will try to give some advice to for disconnecting of from the internet or to make a well making good use of it.
BE CAREFUL when you have a new friend request; it could be a stranger person.
NEVER give your account bank if you don´t know the website, because it probably isn´t reliable.
ALWAYS login out when you finish your session of on your site.
TRY TO use the internet for in useful ways
TAKE TIME to spend it out with your friends.
To sump up, use the Internet but with head use it thoughtfully and always take security measures.
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