Hiromi's note
In my town, there is a beautiful forest and local people take a walk, chatting and enjoy nature.
But one day, I didn’t remember exactly the date, someone showed the forest on SNS.
This photo was really nice and it looked like Princes Mononoke’s forest. After that, Japanese and foreigners tourists were getting to visit there. Then,you know what the end of this story is ?
Local people didn’t take a walk in there anymore and the nature environment was ruined by human.
I felt that SNS has a huge power. It gave us opptunities that we shoud learn how to use SNS for a good way.
Thank you,
Hiromi:)
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Hiromi's note
In my town, there is a beautiful forest and local people take walksa walk, chat,chatting and enjoy nature.But one day, I don't didn’t remember exactly the date, someone showed the forest on SNS.
This photo was really nice, and it looked like Princes Mononoke’s forest. After that, Japanese and foreign tourists started to were getting to visit there. Then, you know what the end of this story is?
Local people stopped walking there, and the natural environment was ruined by humans.
I feel that SNS has a huge power. We have an opportunity to use SNS in a good way.
Thank you,
Hiromi:)
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Hiromi's note
In my town, there is a beautiful forest and where local people take a walks, chatting and enjoy nature.But one day, I didn’t don't remember exactly the date, someone showed published a picture of the forest on SNS.
This photo was really nice; and it looked like Princess Mononoke’s forest. After that, Japanese and foreigners tourists started were getting to visit there it. Then, you know what the end of this story is ?
Local people stopped taking walks didn’t take a walk in there anymore and the natural environment was ruined by human.
I felt feel that SNS has a huge power.
We have an opportunity to use SNS in a good way. <- Tim's correction is great.
Thank you,
Hiromi:)
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