I just finished my work!

Hi every one, how are you? I work at a warehouse. I had been working as a part timer, but I become a full-time from April. I've been studying English for 6 month, but My English and pronunciation are so bad. I speak with friends in English on Skype sometimes, but If you speak English to me, I wouldn't be understand much ^ what you are saying. If you have free, could teach me English and correct my English? So that why I study It. Instead, I will teach you Japanese.

Grey words --> These are mistakes - corrections below. Try to fix the mistakes by yourself before you look :D

So that why I study It. --> I wasn't sure what you wanted to say here.

"so" --> This is correct but better when speaking. Really is good for speaking and writing.

I just finished my work!

Hi every one everyone, how are you? I work at a warehouse. I had been was working as a part timer, but I become became a full-time from in April. I've been studying English for 6 months, but My English and pronunciation are so really bad. I speak with friends in English on Skype sometimes, but If you speak spoke English to me, I wouldn't be understand much of what you are were saying. If you have are free, could you teach me English and correct my English? So that why I study It. Instead In return, I will can teach you Japanese.