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The best son! Some people say that it is a real story. I don't know, but I want to believe that. One day a couple come in a restaurant. The elderly and weak women accompanied by her son. This couple caught the visitors immediate attention. The old lady was ailing so sometimes she unintentionally toppled over a cutlery or dropped food on her clothes. This annoyed some people, but her son did not pay attention to visitors response. All the time they were here the son lovingly took care of his mother. After finishing the meal, he helped her stand up, toke chips off her dress and see his mother to the dressing room. By that time silence reigns at the restaurant and all visitors looked after the strange couple. The man paid and headed to the exit by supporting his mother by the hand. One man asked him :" Sorry, to me, you have left something there, haven't you?". The son replayed:"No, thank you". But the man has not let up:" You did not understand! You live the lesson to each visitors of this institution!!".

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The best son!

Some people say that this is a true story. I don't know but I want to believe it.
One day a couple came into a restaurant; an elderly and weak woman accompanied by her son. This couple caught the other diners' immediate attention. The old lady was ailing so sometimes she unintentionally dropped a piece of cutlery to the floor or dropped food on her clothes. This annoyed some diners, but her son ignored them. All the time they were there the son lovingly took care of his mother. After finishing the meal, he helped her stand up, picked chips off her dress and saw his mother to the dressing room. By that time silence reigned in the restaurant and all the eaters looked after the strange couple. The man paid and headed for the exit, supporting his mother by the hand. One man asked him :" Sorry, but you have left something there, haven't you?". The son replied "No, I haven't, thank you". But the man would not let up: "You did not understand! You left a lesson for each diner in this establishment!!"

Very well written!

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The best son!

Some people say that this is a real story. I don't know, but I want to believe it.
One day a couple came in to a restaurant. The elderly and weak woman was accompanied by her son. This couple caught the visitors' immediate attention. The old lady was ailing so sometimes she unintentionally toppled over a cutlery or dropped food on her clothes. This annoyed some people, but her son did not pay attention to the visitors' response. All the time they were there the son lovingly took care of his mother. After finishing the meal, he helped her stand up, took the chips off her dress and took his mother to the dressing room. By that time silence reigned at the restaurant and all of the visitors looked after the strange couple. The man paid and headed to the exit while supporting his mother by the hand. One man asked him :" Sorry, but you have left something there, haven't you?". The son replied:"No, thank you". But the man would not let up:" You did not understand me! You leave a lesson to each visitors to this institution!!".

Note - you might want to review/study possessive forms - when you have phrases like the 'visitors attention' or the 'visitors response', you need to use an apostrophe - just like if you said 'Bob's car is green' you need an apostrophe between Bob and s to show that it is Bob's car - although overall it was a good story :)

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