Correct me please!
Now I want to tell about food! I hate spice dishes and greasy food. I’m sick of it. I prefer Russian cuisine and I like home-made food. Sometimes I can eat Italian food. For example, I adore pizza and pasta. My favourite pizza is Margarita. In my opinion classic pizza is better than others and it has special taste. But my friends don’t think so.
I like idea of healthy food. I eat many fruits, my breakfast consist of oatmeal or cottage cheese, I try to eat nuts and fruit bars instead chocolate. But I love chocolate very much and I can’t exclude it.
Once I have been on a diet and it was a nightmare! I ate only cereal for one week! I began on Monday and on Friday I almost fainted from malnutrition. Since then I forgot about diets forever.
And finally I want to say that I was vegetarian for one year. Now I eat only chicken meat and fish. I think vegetarianism is not useful for all persons. Some people are in need of meat for the good health.
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Correct me please!
классный текст, я не изминил много :) Джим.
Now I want to talk about food! I hate spicy dishes and greasy food. I’m sick of them. I prefer Russian cuisine and I like home-made food. Sometimes I (can звучит не натуралний) eat Italian food. For example, I adore pizza and pasta. My favourite pizza is Margarita. In my opinion a classic Margarita pizza is better than the others and it has a special taste. But my friends don’t think so.I like the idea of healthy food. I eat lots of fruit, my breakfast consists of oatmeal or cottage cheese, and I try to eat nuts and fruit bars instead of chocolate. But I love chocolate very much and I can’t exclude it from my diet.
Once I went on a diet and it was a nightmare! I only ate cereal for one week! I began on Monday and on Friday I almost fainted from malnutrition. Since then I forgot about diets forever (вот эта конструкция не может по английский-- мы можем сказать I've never dieted since, and I'd be happy to forget about dieting forever!).
And finally, I'd like to say that I was vegetarian for one year. Now I only eat chicken meat and fish. I think vegetarianism is not healthy for everyone. Some people are need meat to stay in good health.
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Correct me please!
Now I want to tell about food! I hate spice dishes and greasy food. I’m sick of it. I prefer Russian cuisine and I like home-made food. Sometimes I can eat Italian food. For example, I adore pizza and pasta. My favourite pizza is Margarita. In my opinion classic pizza is better than others and it has special taste. But my friends don’t think so.I like idea of healthy food. I eat many fruits, my breakfast consist of oatmeal or cottage cheese, I try to eat nuts and fruit bars instead chocolate. But I love chocolate very much and I can’t exclude it.
Once I have been on a diet and it was a nightmare! I ate only cereal for one week! I began on Monday and on Friday I almost fainted from malnutrition. Since then I forgot about diets forever.
And finally I want to say that I was vegetarian for one year. Now I eat only chicken meat and fish. I think vegetarianism is not useful for all persons. Some people are in need of meat for the good health.
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