About wishes
Even if it was only one time during their life everyone thought about having three wishes. Today I want to tell about my three wishes.
The first one, and the main, is physical and mental health for me and my family. No for any disease. Right now I have a high myopia and mild depression. I want to wake up on a one day and see much more better then today without lens and glasses. Even at these days depression is going out sometimes I'm feeling bad. But it's more better than a half year ago.
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About wishes (ENG-American)
Even if it was only one time during once in their life, everyone has thought about having three wishes. Today I want to tell you about my three wishes.The first one, and the main one , is good* physical and mental health for me and my family. No for Without any disease. Right now I have a high myopia and mild depression. I want to wake up on a one day and see much more better** than today without lenses and or glasses. Even at these the days my depression is better, going out*** sometimes I'm feeling I feel bad. But it's more better** than a half a year ago.
* You usually use the adjectives better/good/poor to describe mental/physical health
** better means "more good" so it doesn't need the "more" before it
*** going out is usually used for physical movement (or for partying!)
OBS: This was very good! Most corrections are minor and just to make it sound a bit more natural. Your use of complex sentences is great :)
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