Marriage Proposal Via Email
Dear Jane,
I'm so excited while I'm writing you this email. You make me feel like a teenager who falls in love for the first time. I have dated a lot of women before you and none of them made me feel like you do. I have been dating very beautiful and famous women but they weren't like you. You made me feel like a reborn person. I remember when I first was looking at you I was speechless and I couldn't take my eyes off you. I'm sorry I wrote this letter and don't just saying that to you but I'm so excited that I couldn't wait until I see you. So.. I will do that here - Would you marry me? Please say yes I'm really in love with you.
I hope you guys enjoyed form this story. I appreciated if you could leave comments especially about all the subject of the present perfect and the past.
Thank you!
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Marriage Proposal Via Email
Dear Jane,I'm so excited while As I'm writing you this email I feel very excited. You make me feel like a teenager who has fallen falls in love for the first time. I have dated a lot of women before you and none of them make made me feel like you do. I have dated been dating very beautiful and famous women but they weren't like you. You make made me feel like a reborn person who has been reborn. I remember when I was first was looking at you I was speechless and I couldn't take my eyes off you. I'm sorry I wrote this letter and don't am not just saying that to you but I'm so excited that I couldn't wait until I saw see you. So.. I will do it now that here - Would you marry me? Please say yes, I'm really in love with you.
I hope you guys enjoyed form this story. I appreciated if you could leave comments especially about all the subject of the present perfect and the past.
Thank you!
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Thank you so much! I will do what you recommend and I will keep trying that.
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Well done, it’s a great attempt! The perfect and past tenses can be very hard to get right so I would recommend revising them again, particularly how you use the present perfect and past simple together. Hope my corrections help! If you need any more help with writing, feel free to book a lesson :)
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