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A trip to Rishikesh...... Some time ago. I had planned to visit Rishikesh, "Rishikesh is a city in India's northern state of Uttarakhand " A day prior to my sweet younger brother's birthday, He requested me telling this birthday he want's to celebrate with family somewhere outside. Since I had vacant time no more than 2 days. I had decided to travel Rishikesh and as soon as I set on the driving seat the began the journey the memories of my last visit flashed in my mind and I was amused by the aesthetic feeling, 3 hrs were passed I was driving with enthusiastic continuously and suddenly I notice everyone apart from me were in middle of their dreams while sleeping further I continued my driving for an hour more and with an intention I decided to have a tea break in the middle of the way, to wake them up and to continue my rest of the journey while having a chit-chat with them. At 7 in the morning, we were finally at the glorious Himalayas....... I request you all to guide me for better writing in future. Regards Abhishek Sharma

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A trip to Rishikesh.

Some time ago, I had planned to visit Rishikesh. Rishikesh is a city in the the north Indian state of Uttarakhand.

A day prior to my sweet younger brother's birthday, he told me that for this birthday he wanted to celebrate with family somewhere outside. Since I had only 2 day of free time. I decided to travel to Rishikesh. As soon as I sat in the driver's seat and started my journey, the memories of my last visit flashed in my mind and I was amused by the aesthetic feeling,

Three hours had passed, and I was still driving with enthusiasm when suddenly I noticed that everyone apart from me was stuck in the middle of their dreams while sleeping. I continued farther driving for an hour more. With a keen desire, I stopped driving and decided to have a tea break in the middle of the way. I wanted to wake my companions and to continue the rest of my journey while having a chit-chat with them.

At 7 in the morning, we finally reached the glorious Himalayas. 

I request you all to guide me in how to write better in the future.
Regards
Abhishek Sharma

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