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Freelancing Hi, it's my first time on italki. Thanks for the help and correction of mistakes )) This year I first time tried myself in freelancing. I wrote articles on different topics for an Internet portal. I wrote about vitamins, about health, about sports, about holidays, about finances, about travel. And more about many things. I wrote a lot of articles. I also managed to sell some of my photos. I earned very little, but it was a good experience for me.

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Freelancing

Hi, it's my first time on italki. Thanks for the help and correction of mistakes.
This year I tried my hand at freelancing. I wrote articles on different topics for an Internet portal. I wrote about vitamins, about health, about sports, about holidays, about finances, about and travel, as well as many other subjects. I wrote a lot of articles. I also managed to sell some of my photos. I earned very little, but it was a good experience for me.

Notes:

to try one's hand at (something) [idiom]: to attempt to do something for the first time, typically to find out if one is good at it.

Regarding the omission of the preposition, if it is used identically with each element in the series, you need not repeat it.

Your English is excellent! Welcome and best wishes to you!


 

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Hello Marina 

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This year, for the first time, I tried working freelance. I wrote articles on different topics for an Internet portal. I wrote about vitamins, about health, about sports, about holidays, about finances and about travel. And about many other things. I wrote a lot of articles. I also managed to sell some of my photos. I earned very little, but it was a good experience for me.


Well done and enjoy the rest of your Sunday!

Best wishes, Carolina. 

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Freelancing

Hi, it's my first time on italki. Thanks for the help and correction of mistakes ))
This year, I for the first time I tried myself in (my hand at) freelancing. I wrote articles on different topics for an Internet portal (website?). I wrote about vitamins, about health, about sports, about holidays, about finances, about and travel. And more about many other things. I wrote a lot of (many) articles. I also managed to sell some of my photos. I earned very little, but it was a good experience for me.

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