She (Please help me correcting my composition)
Many people believe 17 years old is the Dreamy age , but I don't think so. She say.
When she was 17 years old she experienced all over joy and sorrow.
she understood that when you had one thing and has not resolved along. It's the very hard of yourself.
At the 17 years old , she know what is lose what is tangled and what is excruciation.
She learned the cherish patience and how to make a good choose at the anxious.
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"Many people believe that 17 is the dreamy age , but I don't think so",she says.
When she was 17 years old she experienced both joy and sorrow. She realized that when you have one thing and it has not been resolved along. It's very hard for us.
At the age of 17 years, she knew what is lose ,what is tangled and what is excruciation.
She learned to cherish patience and how to make a good choice at the time of anxiousness.
When she was 17 years old she experienced both joy and sorrow. She realized that when you have one thing and it has not been resolved along. It's very hard for us.
At the age of 17 years, she knew what is lose ,what is tangled and what is excruciation.
She learned to cherish patience and how to make a good choice at the time of anxiousness.
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